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MY MISTAKE I know that all girls don´t like soccer.
CORRECTION I know that not all girls like soccer
REASON error gramatical

MY MISTAKE The best important for me are the the feelings.
CORRECTION The best important for me is feelings
REASON We use is for feelings and the is not necessary.

MY MISTAKE Because the personality and way ofe be are better than exterior body.
CORRECTION Because personality and character are better than physical appearance.
REASON character and appearance body are better adjectives than way of be and exterior body.


MY MISTAKE I would like that my ideal girl likes videogames
CORRECTION I would also like that my ideal girl likes videogames
REASON Also is neccesary for the structure of the sentence

MY MISTAKE I hope that my parents accept her because they are very special.
CORRECTION I hopet that my parentes accept her because they are very demanding.
REASON In this case demanding is better adjetive than special