A Funny Story

Three years ago, when I was in highschool , I had a motorcycle and every afternoon I come out for a stroll, this activity help me to distract about stress.In one ocassion, when I pass near to one Oxxo, a beautiful girl left this store , she was nice,she had beautiful eyes, she was perfect and I saw her for 15 seconds. Then my motorcycle collided with a bumper , I lost the control and I fell to the paviment. The girl saw me and began to lough.

It was a embarrasing experience but after that I began to talk with this beautiful girl because she was in my highschool. Then we wad a relation ship and we were a excellent couple. Now she was in Puebla and I was in UNAM, the distancie produce that we split up.

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MY MISTAKE I know that all girls don´t like soccer.
CORRECTION I know that not all girls like soccer
REASON error gramatical

MY MISTAKE The best important for me are the the feelings.
CORRECTION The best important for me is feelings
REASON We use is for feelings and the is not necessary.

MY MISTAKE Because the personality and way ofe be are better than exterior body.
CORRECTION Because personality and character are better than physical appearance.
REASON character and appearance body are better adjectives than way of be and exterior body.


MY MISTAKE I would like that my ideal girl likes videogames
CORRECTION I would also like that my ideal girl likes videogames
REASON Also is neccesary for the structure of the sentence

MY MISTAKE I hope that my parents accept her because they are very special.
CORRECTION I hopet that my parentes accept her because they are very demanding.
REASON In this case demanding is better adjetive than special

My ideal Person

I think that my ideal girl is very funny, sociable and sensitive.She likes soccer, because I love soccer and I know that not all girls like soccer but she has to understand me. She likes pets because I have 2 dogs and a little turtle.

The best important quality for me is feelings, because personality and character are better than physical appearance. In fact, I value the person 50% exterior body and 50% feelings.

I would also like that my ideal girl likes videogames, because I have much passion for videogames and I was wondering if we will have a good time playing videogames such as PES or Tony Hawks. Finally, I hope that my parentes accept her because they are very demanding about personality and character. My mother hopes that I choose a nice girl and not a selfish one.